Thursday, October 23, 2008

Beaches

I have been learning about 5 W poems. 5 W poems are when you have to put who, what, when, where and why. This is one of my 5 W poems.


Beaches

The beautiful, bright, sparkling water
Found itself washing up onto the yellow, wet sand.
The season of hot summer.
When the water shines like a diamond
reflecting the sun rise
and when the sun goes to bed.

2 comments:

Nicola Harvie said...

Beautiful poem! Keep up the awesome learning!

GeorgiaMay said...

Hi, Izzy
I can picture the beach in my mind. That poem is very creative. Keep up the good work.
From Georgia.